Saturday, March 2, 2013
Dialogue
"Olivia, guess what I heard my parents say last night!" - Waverly
"What?" - Olivia
"I'll just start right at the beginning, I was pretty sure they were discussing my birthday, so I got my ear real close the the door, and first I heard my mom say..."
Mother: "We only have a few month to decide..."
Father: " I know, I just want to make sure its the right decision."
Mother: "Either way, it's a good decision."
Father: "But, we got to decide on money, school/work time, and make sure we're prepared!"
Mother: "Well, if we do our first choice, it would be less costly, money and time wise, but the second option is what I want to do."
Father: "I know, but we don't always get to do what we want to do, dear..."
Mother: "But, its her birthday, and growing up I always imagined my daughters 5th birthday being a certain way, and I am just set on it, Michael."
Father: "I'll check at work to get the time off of work, and you talk to her school."
"So, I know were going somewhere and I figured we were gonna go visit my grandma, but I kept listening.. " - Waverly
Mother: "Oh my gosh, I am so excited. Where should we stay? I'll look online and decide where, okay?"
Father: "Well, you are the big planner in the family. I assume everything should be set and ready to go my midnight!"
Mother: "I might be more excited than Waverly will be when she finds out."
Father: "Why don't we tell her?"
Mother: "She's asleep, Michael!"
Father: "You haven't been hearing all the movement in her room?!"
Mother: "I must have been too excited! Waverly, come here, please."
"And, then they told me that we are going to WALT DISNEY WORLD during my birthday! I am so excited, Olivia!"
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This is pretty cute :) I admit I was looking for some sort of conflict, though, as that's what the directions ask for. As such, when I read the first couple dialogue exchanges between the parents, i wasn't thinking they were planning a trip. I thought the girl was going to overhear her parents making plans to get a divorce or something!
ReplyDeleteI guess I didn't realize conflict HAD to be negative? Otherwise, I feel like the conflict was stated.
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